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Odyssey

The melodic oceanic,
Orchestrates the hands of time.
Beyond depths of perception,
Far into the Blue divine.
To devour this moment,
Only paradise to the wise.
Sand hills capture the horizon,
Coral castles tower the sky.
And In the patience of the years,
Confects the treasures of dark worlds.
To bring to light such purity,
Is like pearls hidden in rough shells.
But as minds are drawn to the distant,
The eyes will see it clear.
So they’ll face,
To witness the truth,
This Odyssey so perfect.

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  • Despairkitty
    March 14, 2007
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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    Wow this piece was a breath of fresh air and it had such a wonderful flair to it. It spoke to me of days of old and peacefulness!! I am a greeter and wanted to welcome you to the site. Feel free to ask any questions and I hope you enjoy your time here.
    Despair