Dreams of happiness drowned in my love for you,
Hopes of bliss shattered by your kisses,
A heart tattered and dead is all i have left
and all I can think about
is how beautiful you look tonight...
A contest entry
- Quickie by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 6, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ok, this is like gorgeous. I mean, this is so so so lovely and airy and beautiful. This is such a wonderful poem. So soft and delicate and very nice. Each word is beautiful and the poem at whole is a wonderful penning. The flow is great and the imagery is so strong. Nice job here and thank you for entering. Best of luck.
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Beware of la femme fatal! She will only bring you down...unless you are strong enough to elevate her.
Good luck with this...and beauty isn't every thing. It doesn't last- although enticing and exciting I admit- Seek what is within her...what is real in her. She will love you for that!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....this got straight to my heart...i loved this to bits...and i could relate totally to this!greeat job once again applause to you!!!!!
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AWWW!!! I really like this poem. It's really sweet and sad. I love it.
Megan
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