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Evil Tear

The hurt, the pain
as it rolls down her cheek

full of pain and sorrow

how does she bear it

this pain of hers

i bear this pain

i do not know how

i want it to go away

but cant

the pain

the hurt

the sorrow

the sound of  a 12 year old crying

she will busrt

blood will be spilled

someone will

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  • lemonlime51
    March 21, 2007
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    IM AFRAID OF YOU!

    AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE YOU COACOAPOALA!

  • Northern Downpour
    March 13, 2007

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    Sad. Tears are powerful. Just one droplet of water, one droplet of life. This can be related by nearly everyone who has cried. Pains cut and tears hurt. Well done. ~Pixie~


  • Saphire Dreams
    March 13, 2007

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    well...um...say wat?

    well that last part kinda freaked me out....just a little, bout the part where the blood will be spreaded or something like that....otherwise, very good


    • kagome-chan
      March 17, 2007
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      i know where you live..

      ha ha ha i just felt like writing a werid but true poem