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Wanton Ash

Prehistoric, carnivorous
wanton ragged grace,
lay you down in ashes, burn
my sticky sweet fingers
swallow you; whole.

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  • Hadji Murad
    March 30, 2007

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    This is fabulous. I mean, each line is so delicate and wonderful and lovely. I really enjoyed this poem. Lay you down in the ashes. Such a wonderful line. I love that line so so so much. Amazing job and thank you for entering. Best of luck.


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 13, 2007
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    Wow...well, I am really happy you stopped by my poetry because here I am checking you out, and I like what I see You have talent, dear Poet. This is delicious.
    Now...let me go read some more.

    Love, Lane


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 13, 2007

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    I like unique, and this contest brings that out of us poets... A job well done, all the best in the contest. Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Mr C
    March 13, 2007

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    Wow- amazing how people can do this..................I can only imagine you have written before (as you are new to AP)........if not, this is amazing.

    Well done, Zen.