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A Love Defined !

It's said that absence makes the heart grow fonder

and I guess no one can attest to than better than I.

Through distance and time, my heart still chime,

the melody of a love that just will not die.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know the desperate quietness, the empty hours,

the pros and cons, yet even with all the knowing,

the passion still reigns strong, the memories linger on,

and you are the desire that keeps right on flowing.

 

 

 

 

 

For us, this is a well-traveled path, bridges crossed,

mountains climbed and various obstacles discarded.

Despite the many sleepless nights, the maybes and the mights,

stand emotions that we both felt were oh so guarded.

 

 

 

 

 

We find ourselves back again at the beginning,

of the whispers in the dark defining regret after regret.

Embracing fears that we shared,pain we thought were spared,

acknowledging plans we tried hard to forget.

 

 

 

 

 

I still remember the tears that cascaded down my face

and  when they dried,they continuously dripped in my heart.

So there I drew the conclusion,that you and I were an illusion,

that vivid longings had conjured up from the very start.

 

 

 

 

 

Now many years have passed, years that you have inhabited

my soul though mutually we agreed to go in separate directions.

For the roots of love run too deep, and into awaiting arms we creep,

bringing us back to the crossroad, these often visited intersections.

 

 

 

So if absence does make the heart grow fonder, do we dare

tempt fate and listen to the rhythm of two hearts combined.

Knowing distance has not quelled and time has surely failed,

to bring to a halt this love that has so clearly been defined.

 

 

 

 

MARJORIE JOYCE LESLIE

03/13/07

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  • Tetris
    February 16, 2009

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    The poem has a draw to it.

    It felt as though each line pulled you to the next.

    Verbally and thematically, it has a very complete and full feeling.

    Enjoyed it very much.


  • klassy lassy
    April 28, 2007

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    I'm touched by the sadness and loss in these words and feelings that persist beyond the twists and turns of lives going in opposite directions and all the might have beens, if only.... (sighhh!)

  • Rajaram
    April 26, 2007

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    Well composed. Excellent flow and beautiful presentation. Time can change all but not true love. I would be happy, if you could spare your time to stamp your views on my poems.

  • Bob Fox
    March 30, 2007

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    a fine write

    Honesty & passion in these lines you penned. We all travel that road as we age it seems. But alas, I wish you that lost love found again


  • Maureen silver member
    March 23, 2007
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    Very nicely done!

    You expressed so well how a person feels when time hasn't changed the love they hold in their heart for 'that special someone'. Though the thoughts expressed are tinged with sadness, I always enjoy a love poem, especially when it's done so well.

    ♥ Maureeen


  • Diamond
    March 13, 2007

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    Magnificent!

    WOW, I am impressed not just by the poetry but by just how well you express yourself. Your words are so genuine, heartfelt and emotional and simply tugs at the readers heart. This to me is a platinum poem and your my dear friend are an awesome writer with so much to offer. This poem would do really well in a contest. Avril


  • squirrelmick
    March 13, 2007

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    Brilliant

    This made me feel really sad... it is beautifully written, and you use such amazing images and choose each word with care. Your poetry is always so enjoyable to read, and I regret not having done that much lately. This is truly brilliant... I especially like verse 3s and the imagery in it. Well done, keep it up.


  • Samplette gold member
    March 13, 2007

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    You have a natural hand at love poetry. You wear your heart upon your shoulder. This was asolutely beautiful. Touched me deeply. Such a pleasure to read.
    Sam


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 13, 2007

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    Awesome!

    Wow, you sure do express yourself heart and soul well through the thoughts you jot so crystal clear here. I can understand why you feel the way you do, and waiting sometimes feels like forever, but how sweet it is to gaze upon the eyes of your long lost love. It is emotionally hard I'm sure with the ups and down, and the not arounds..but I guess you can only follow your heart and pray it makes the right choice. Love your works as always, because I love you. Much love always, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo

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