Sensuous wonder in your eyes
Speak volumes when open
Half shut they tell tales of lust
That fill one’s heart with warmth
Of a love that’s meant to be
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended April 6, 2007, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very Nice
Love the imagery, congrates on silver sweet soul, thanks for sharing your talent, pen on.
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Thanks for the trophy much appreciated.
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This is exceptionally gorgeous. I mean, this is five lines of amazing depth and brilliance. I love this poem so so so much. Each line is full of warmth and beauty. The poem at whole is astounding. Wonderful job and thank you for entering. Best of luck in the judging.
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Oh yeah, eyes are the windows to the soul!
I had a boss who used to say my eyes spoke volumes!
Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Beautiful-
The eyes have spoken
Beautiful verse You have penned my Friend
Love those images again~
Speaks volumes!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Great job....wonderful picture and sooo true...one can tell so much of eye...makes me think of someone special, near and dear to me...he uses his eyes to hold me in his heart! Good luck!
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