Spattered over an olive toned canvas
a collage of blue, purple and yellow hues lays;
cradled in a frigid one-sided embrace of 'I'm sorry'
as viridian lenses cloud with telescopic tears
irritated by dreams turned to dust.
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This is so intense and raw and beautiful. The picture and the words are just so creative and colorful. The imagery in this poem is astounding and the entire poem is quite profound and deep. I love this so much.
as viridian lenses cloud with telescopic tears
irritated by dreams turned to dust.
Such lovely, beautiful lines. The words are powerful and poignant and yet soft---airy almost. The tone of this peace is serene and lovely.
Amazing job and thank you for entering. Best of luck. -
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This is intense. wow is all I can say! This piece really hit me. Well done mummy another brilliantly deep write.
Love you always,
Your Lunar Angel
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Oh wow, great wording with a great image! Best wishes in the contest
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this is sad hun bbut it reads beautifully and somewhat cryptic. the use of color in your images makes this piece in my opinion. And though we are at times tresspassed upon that doesn't mean our dreams can never be realized
love,
Master
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Nice write, very strong wording and beautiful picture too. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow! Amazing and awesome write, Bel! Wishing you the best in this challenge, sweetie! Well done!
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Nice write, simple yet strong. This was very well worded, and it even has an even shape to it. This is well writen good luck in the contest!!
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Powerful write, Bel. I really like this. The wording is just amazing. It beams of sorrow and remorse. Nicely penned piece girl. Keep up the good work and best of luck to you in the contest.
Love always,
Kristen
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