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~*Inside*~

angry
used
abused
lost
broken
hollow
bruised
bleeding
needing
sad
tears
fears
aching
abandoned
torn
painful
sorrow


I am ever so angry with you. I feel abandoned and abused. I feel so lost and used. Broken is the heart that is sad. Tears coursing bruised cheeks. Fears returning full force. Hollow random thoughts. A torn and aching soul. Needing the comfort of love. Yet bleeding a slow and painful death of sorrow.

These are the emotions trapped inside.

Yet I move on and learn to love like that again.

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  • BittersweetPhantasm
    March 14, 2007

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    hmmm... its not quite there... but i do like it. if you could write the option number in your author's box please.