flying back home...
each star
brighter
Author notes
Hey reenie, love your contests! Enjoy your 50th one!
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Delightful
These few words have created a brilliant snapshot of your feelings in my mind and the “Ah” moment has put me to a trance state …
Well done…
Good luck in the contest…
mina
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There is that feeling coming back home you've drawn so well. I used to travel quite a bit between New Jersey and Virginia, my family in Jersey but my home in Virginia. It always seemed the last 50-miles of the trip either way, the stars always shone brighter. You've drawn so much an image and a feeling in so few words.
Best wishes to you in the contest!
Jo
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Surprisingly beautiful and tranquil write- really lovely.
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I am glad you are enjoying the contest, thank you for entering
Your write reminded me of being in an aircraft heading home in the middle of the night, and the stars indeed seeming to be brighter...I guess that would be because of the anticipation of seeing home again soon. Best wishes in the contest,
reenie
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