How do snowflakes know
To form in a way
Not seen before
To flutter like verses
To the muddy floor
How do children know
To form in a way
Not seen before
To utter those firsts
To the evermore
How does time know to melt us
To the crystal fall
What was once so unique
Becomes like us all
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired. by A Murderous Lament.
380 points, ended March 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great first verse. I thought it was pure poetic genius! You really have a way with words! How long have you been writing? Thanks again for crossing my path...this site has been great for that with me. I hope you are getting as much out of being here as I feel like I am....kp
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Pure Gold Stephanie!!!!!
just thought U should know.... -brian (had to come back and take another quick look before i left!!!)
...take care.....
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!!!!!!!!definitely!!!!!!!!
only the most beautiful soul is so capable of thoughts as loving as these. Stephanie, you have melted my soul deep with these words of comparabilities. genuine.
a great outlook you have on life here
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this poetry really throws us at our memories and the hopes and dreams we have for all!!!!!!
How does time know to melt us
To the crystal fall
What was once so unique
Becomes like us all
that we are not really separate from everything else around us, that we are one in the same when really compared. exceeds originality!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya Steph.,
-bri.
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Great.
Good imagery. Very differant. I love it.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT -
bravo
A lovely and moving piece of poetry, well and so deftly done...bravo...bravo...bravo
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