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Now and Forever

I walk amidst the sun, sand, wind and sea
Imbibed full of the essence that is you
Experiencing living happily
In every single blessed thing I do

We pass the rows and rows of roses fair
Our senses saturated with their gifts
And like the blessings from your tender care
The beauty of the rose my spirit lifts

Enamored with this special place and time
Be it an hour, a day, a month, a year
Knowing someday it is no longer mine
The roses under snow, and you’re not here

Treasures of my heart, moments like this
Sustain me in my walk through the abyss





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  • a woman to love
    March 14, 2007

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    Enamored with this special place and time
    Be it an hour, a day, a month, a year
    Knowing someday it is no longer mine
    The roses under snow, and you’re not here

    Treasures of my heart, moments like this
    Sustain me in my walk through the abyss


    exquisite...


  • Trixie08
    March 14, 2007

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    This is just beautiful and heart-warming. It's very lovely sonnets are always been a favorite of mine. Many people just don't write them nowadays. This piece just shows passion and devotion for another. Beautiful as always. Great Write.

  • myrataal silver member
    March 14, 2007

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    Did I tell you ...

    that you write the most wondrous love poems when sad and joyous simultaneously? Kristin is such a lovely Muse: you will write us her gifts. It was such a privilege to read this tender poem. Thank you Allan.

    Love
    Always Myra


    • Allan Emery gold member
      March 14, 2007
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      Thank you for your kind words, but I must confess that Sherlock was inspired to write this for Amera. If that has you confused, imagine how Sherlock feels! He is just throwing his hands in the air and going about his business as I instruct.

      • myrataal silver member
        March 15, 2007
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        Ah -- but then: Amera too, is a lovely Muse!

        and I am not at all amazed that Sherlock is at wit's end! Let him work out his course ... do not even give him a clue. Waiting to see what he will discover.

  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 13, 2007
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    Not Much On...

    The experiencing of sonnets, but, I do know lovely when I see it.


    • Allan Emery gold member
      March 14, 2007
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      I am a great place to learn sonnets! After reading mine, you will love the ones by others! Especially by people who can do them right!

  • Soulful Woman silver member
    March 13, 2007

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    WOW...A big strong man with a gentle heart...how sweet is that?? This was beautiful and had a soft flow that just touches the reasder.
    Loved it...
    Soulful Woman


    • Allan Emery gold member
      March 13, 2007
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      One rises to the occasion of the inspiration!!! Thank you for your lovely comment.

  • Allan Emery gold member
    March 13, 2007
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    *big smiles* Rest, love. This comment was enough.

  • Amera gold member
    March 13, 2007

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    This is a perfectly executed sonnet and with each new poem you are showing me what a wonderful poet you are. The image is emotionally charged and touched my heart. Who said “strong macho men are dumb”? You have it all my love; brawn and internal beauty. That’s why I love you.

    Love,
    Amera


    • Allan Emery gold member
      March 13, 2007
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      You write the best comments. Well, to have it all... I would have to have you... I guess you are right.
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