In no sense ...
No sense at all ~
Not thinking
Of taking a
Climactic fall -
Eden-like chaste
Now meets urban sprawl
Call heard by no one
Except ... someone small!
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 24 hours - INNOCENCE by misselaineous.
300 points, ended March 18, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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no small thing!!!
wow! short & sweet & very re-par-teet! excellent write 'j' cheers my ever spinning friend 'd' (david)
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in no sense...
i liked the opening of this short but emphatically well written poem. Well Done!
Thank you for entering my contest
elaine
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"Out of the mouth of babes comes pure praise.." It's a most admirable quality to be able to see things through the eyes of a child. To put it in verse makes it even more endearing. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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I very much like this deceptively simple, but actually clever, take on innocence, Joy. Best of luck in the contest.
Bill
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