I am crazy
I've been told
My ideas are really stupid
The people in my head
I know
have some kick-ass ideas
They make up words for me to use
when I have nothing to say
Infact
They're helping me right now
write this poem down
I can't ryme
and I can't spell
It's obviouse to me
I need brain cells to stay alive
Mine just fall asleep
I want to fall asleep with them
But the voices
will not let me
They scream and shout
and drive me insane
from the inside out
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very attractive poem. Sitting comfortably against my eyes.
I want to fall asleep with them
But the voices
will not let me
Beautifully put.
Well done.
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This is a great write you penned here dear poet, well done
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Oh my god. This is bursting with wonderful confusion. It is, well I love it. Very good write! I love it.
"My ideas are really stupid
The people in my head
I know
have some kick-ass ideas"<=] lol
I love your poems... good write.
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