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Eternity

My time has come
and then it passed
I missed my chance to leave

I live in the dark
so that no one will see
The blood that I shed for thee

I want the light
to flood back in
so I can be full of joy

I want you to see
My blood shed for thee
and see the way I live now

They gather round me
I am scared
I want to run and hide
my legs are jelly
I can't move
Nor can I lay down and cry

Come back to the light
They say over and over
I can not see a thing
They want me to come
but I can not leave
I'm trapped here for eternity

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  • Heavenly Star
    March 24, 2007

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    This is a great poem you wrote here, very powerful filled with so much emotion. Well done dear poet


  • X-xKillLifex-X
    March 13, 2007

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    wow.... very meaningful. The bird trapped in a cage feeling, eh? I like it.. in fact I love it. This is actually inspiring me to write. hmmm.. Thankyou... amazing write... **applause**