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Lost

Old wounds still fresh,
Old acts still pierce the flesh,

An old betrayal,
An untold tale,

It stays inside the head,
Filling with dread,

The trust they had is lost,
Replaced by a icy frost,

Even when they try,
It is always covered by a lie,

Nothing seems real anymore,
Nothing like before,

We go back and forth like a dance,
Yet the truth is we’re in a trance,

Neither of us can break it,
Neither of us will forsake it.

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  • bleed-it-out
    March 28, 2007

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    im not a fan of rhyming poems but when i see one i love i say it and i loved this it really worked well it did not sound like you took 5 days to try and make it rhyme great job!!!