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To know me you must know.

I am here again tonight and you say you know me.
Just think to yourself and you really no nothing of me.
As the great Smokey Robinson said.
You look at me and see my smile.
You listen to me and hear the jokes I tell.
Look closer it is so easy to see,
For you can trace the tracks of the tears that flow.
If you could only feel part of what im feeling.
For you to know how alone I really feel inside.
When it seems there is nobody there who really cares.
Then at the same time I do not wish this fate upon anyone.
Destined to be alone is just what I am.
So go on ahead and walk away same as everyone else.

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  • Andi. gold member
    April 1, 2007
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    I'd never walk away from u baby
    well done
    luv dani


  • saseychik0688
    March 18, 2007
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    you wont be alone forever will you just havent found that special girl yet but i can be sure that you will. because your a wonderful person, your sweet, loving, caring, you have a great personality & alot of other good things about you, you just have to believe that youll find someone.


  • blueyez
    March 13, 2007

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    I feel this write so much tonight too Will! But I do think I really know you. You are a lot deeper than most males I know no matter of your age! You are a wonderful person and that is why when you hurt you hurt so deep! I'm sorry for all the pain others have caused you Will but we are the strong and you gotta give yourself credit for that! If you weren't you wouldn't still be here! I love you my dear friend!


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    March 13, 2007

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    Well Done!!

    You did a great job expressing your true feelings in this poem. I don't see why you would be destined to be alone,though. You are a wonderful person Wills, and there are plenty of people out there so don't give up. This is a very sad and honest write. Thanks for sharing it, and take care Cuz. ~Jani~


  • Asylaarix
    March 13, 2007

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    I can't just walk away from you ... your my baby ... and you mean so much to me ... I love you to pieces ... and I will never NEVER walk away ... I do know you ... and I do know that you are more then what you make yourself out to be ... your kind loving creative sweet sensative and so so much more ... I LOVE YOU!


  • Jasmine Minx
    March 13, 2007
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    will this is a sad poem but i jsut hope that u know i will always be here for you.

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