You degrade me with hypocrisy
My superior
An older form of myself
Humiliated
Beyond your knowledge
Not knowing
What is truth
Or what is lie
I have faith in me
I will not die
Through deception
I will survive
Author notes
This should speak for itself? I have chosen option 1.
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- Heartbreak... by BittersweetPhantasm.
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k thanks for writing the option number.
this is a good piece - completely different perspective to all the others. i like that. its short and sweet.
well done and good luck. -
I am the older brother. This makes me think about my younger siblings perhaps in a way I've not thought of before and I am not altogether comfortable with it. Good write it works.
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hmmmm... you need to write the option number in your author box...
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Very well done! I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. I was thinking about my dad, instead of my older sister. This could fit for her too. A good write!
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