Sometimes I wish I had a seat belt
Just to make me feel safe
It would have to be portable
and fit just great
I would wear it all the time
and adjust it very tight
I would never take it off
as long as it was right
I want to find a way
to have my cake and eat it too
To wear my personal seat belt
around my waist replacing you
Maybe they might think I'm crazy
But someday they'll understand
That I wish I didn't need a seatbelt
Because I wish it was your hands
A contest entry
- Love Me, Hate Me, Love Nature, Love yourself. by sluha.
530 points, ended April 20, 2007, 14 entries
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wow this is a very touching piece... The whole seatbelt thing got me a little confused in the beginning but then I got it... My favorite line would have to be "To have my cake and eat it too" my kind of cake is chocolate cake...don't really care for any other type (though I will still eat other types)... but anyways this is a very nice piece... it doesn't really fit any category but nonetheless it is a good work... well thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest.
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sorry it took so long to reply to your comment ive been away from the computer for a while thanx
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