Majestic to a stellar tapestry,
early morning’s star
dispels darkness.
While the glorious crown of amber,
glows regal.
Smiling eyes sparkle,
like a gems spectrum of bending
white light.
Long after days bloom,
the sunset’s ambiance
obliges the macrobiotic orange glow.
Resetting natures course while,
traversing the heavens,
to a symphony of light.
Writings of Malabu©2007
A contest entry
- Color Me Quickly - 24 hour contest by Heart Sutra.
405 points, ended March 13, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - No Title: Just Come Have a Look by I-Am-Custard.
900 points, ended July 5, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh this is an great write! I like this! Nice job
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This poem is just perfect. I am surprised you did not win the contest because your poem is pure gold. Love and hugs
- joanne
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I like "symphony of light" and the overall spiritual feeling of this poem.
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mal- i can't speak except to tell you i adored the light imagery of this.. the 'orange glow' is fantastic, and splendidly penned.. 'a gems spectrum' all your phrasing within this is spectacular.. fantastic
-s
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This contest sure is colorful well done once again my dear Mally,
warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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