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You Will Always Be Mine

Every time he spoke
She felt that shiver down her spine
It seemed all like a joke
Until he said you will always be mine

She knew something was wrong
Maybe it was a sign
She thought she could stay strong
Until he said you will always be mine

She was confused
But she didn't want to whine
Her heart felt bruised
Until he said you will always be mine

One day everything changed
She gave him a simple quiz
Their love was exchanged
And then she finally knew she would never be his

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  • Davitude
    March 18, 2007
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    GABBY u have POEMS? lol your a good writer gab u should definetly write more


  • Raida Boy94
    March 12, 2007
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    ...daaang that was interesting you know how to make poems that was personal best ooh ya!