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new born babe

as the child
comes from
the mother's
belly
free from all
the evil
that has bestowed
this earth
if only to freeze
the time frame
as a new born babe

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  • misselaineous
    March 18, 2007

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    you have captured that moment of innocence when a child is born
    thank you for entering my contest
    elaine

  • Rajaram
    March 13, 2007

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    Nice Poem. Good thought. Everyone wants to be a child at anytime. This shows every one love Innocence. good Choice of Idea