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Boredom in Biology On Valentines Day

There’s a sunrise in these veins,
in frothy space cut thin as moist,
lemon moonlight deep within,
seeping through like wine,

like the dripping ceiling where I sit
as every edge serrates.
The petals wearing lipstick,
jagged liner, aren’t me.

The lemon moves and blasts us
with its effervescent space,
seeping through the room like wine,
dripping, glowing waves.

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It's not about the person who gave me the rose, just the rose itself, as a rose.

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  • The-Phoenix
    March 12, 2007
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    I told you I love it!

    And i really do! Great job master poet friend of mine!
    <3 Megan