Hues becoming

Beads of thoughts
like necklaces
draping the mind,
coloring the textures
that the eyes
choose to see.

Sometimes rainbows stun,
flashing through in the midst of storms
till our vision
is no longer blind
to the color of life
we refuse to look at
allowing our essence
shades of brighter meaning
slowly sipping upon
hues becoming.

A contest entry

Color Me Quickly - 24 hour contest by Heart Sutra. 405 points, ended March 13, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Heart Sutra
March 12, 2007
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This is full of beauty and I like the subtle aspects of "hues becoming."

Desire
March 12, 2007

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Wow-
Stunning verse You have penned and Love the images You bring forth~
Thank You for bringing them to Life~
Enjoyed the Journey very much

Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and my Love~ Desire~*~

penman
March 12, 2007
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Thank you love. You are always so precious.

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