It's life & death,
It's black & white,
I cannot change it,
Tell my why.
I don't know what's happening,
everything is going wrong,
Just see right through me,
I wish I was gone.
I could never just sit there,
I could never just think,
All of my life,
I would never just blink.
I'm not going anywhere soon,
So leave me be,
Don't label me something else,
because I am me.
I am what i am,
You can't judge me for what you see,
You cant hide from your heart,
You don't even know me.
You took my trust my life,
not knowing the pain,
Leaving my with hate & strife,
Leaving me insane.
It took all that was in me,
all my power & strength,
To hear what you said to me,
To the fullest length.
Give me one good reason,
Why I should forgive,
After all you've done,
After all we've been through.
I just want to forget it,
Don't make me remember,
But I cant escape it,
Since back in December.
You stole my heart,
You never gave it back,
All I have to show,
Is what I now lack.
I've tried to move on,
I've tried to forget,
But all I can do,
Is remember regret.
Now I want to know why,
I deserve at least that,
I deserve to know,
Why'd you turn back?
You said it was you,
But can i really believe that?
What was the real reason,
Did you think I was fat?
You would never stand up,
You would always hide,
Now I know why,
And you definetly were not on my side.
I tried to get you back,
Really I did,
You were so distant,
No, you were just being a kid.
You were totally beleivabe,
& I really fell for it,
Now I'm in pain
Boy, you had some wit.
Was it all fake?
Or was some of it true?
Was it all part of the game,
I never knew.
But now it's all over,
I don't if I'll trust again,
It's time to move on,
To meet other men.
I just wanted you to never forget,
You caused so much pain,
I want you to live with it,
I want it to drive you unforgettably insane.
A contest entry
- March New Member's Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended April 6, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Most definately a life changing event. And one that many can relate to from your words. Your poem has good flow and keeps the attention all the way through.
I enjoyed reading it even if it was too long for the contest criteria.
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Awesome job! Though the poem is a little bit too long for our contest. Sorry, but thanks for trying to enter
--Tim -
Thanks for entering
A poem filled with raw emotions and expressing your anger towards another for what they did to you.
Sometimes it helps to break a poem into stanzas to ease the read especially online, but this is only a suggestion to assist you in making your work more reader friendly and is in no way a criticism.
Let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
Welcome to Allpoetry!
You’ve certainly poured out emotions in this write; it is a very good poem. I would like to take this opportunity to welcome you to the site.
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WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!
A very sad write you have penned. There are so many people around who use us then spit us out. Sunds like your experiences have you wondering why as we all do and often blame ourselves.
A truly heartfelt write penned here. All thebest for you in the future.
Thank you for entering our contest.
Gaylene
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