S alivating, he arranges to meet her
L onging to hear that purr
A nticipating a deep penetration
V isioning her joining his nation
E xciting his insatiable hunger
W aking her soul with thunder
O ffering her a key to his door
M aking her a slave ever more
A llowing no escape from the heat
N eeding always his hot meat
Y earning to be his meal each day
O pening herself as resigned prey
U nfolding moist lips to receive him
A rranging to take all of him in
R ything, she consumes his seed
E merging with screams of greed
F rothing at the mouth of desire
O rganizing her life for his fire
R elegating herself to her pyre
E volving, into his edible toy
V isiting all of her places of joy
E levating his possession of her
R esponding as he licks her fur
M onitoring her shivered responses
I ntegrating all love’s nuances
N egating her mere existence
E liminating her recompense
N urturing this crazy dysfunction
O wning her in total emersion
W ishing for even more consumption
she is gone, now . . . into him . . .
it is as if . . . she has never been . . .
A contest entry
- Anything goes by Beating.
450 points, ended May 1, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Love by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended May 24, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Interesting. A lot of imagery in this and it's dark and unique. The reader can picture it all and the ending ties it all up. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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this was a really great acrostic poem..i realy enjoyed reading this..your words were strong, powerful and emotional as well..they flowed well to keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~ -
this was a great write and i really enjoyed reading this write...it flowed very smoothly and was very powerful as well...keep writting your talented
~Chrissy~
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