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[ I wish I could sleep ]

I wish I could sleep
I woud drift into a dream
But I can't seem
To silence my thoughts
I want to sleep and
dream my troubles away
But I kow that won't work
My troubles will stay
They will haunt forever
They will keep me  awake
My thoughts will collide
in a misereable mush
My creativity
dies
Just like my inside
I am dead inside
Black as night
If I showed you the way
Would you follow
or fight
The inside is dark
The outsid is darker
I can't seem to find
My way back to the light

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  • Heavenly Star
    March 26, 2007
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    This is a great poem, well done dear poet

  • samcuy
    March 12, 2007
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    i liked the way you made it flow and how your rhyme syme was. it's a really good poem. i like it alot.

    My creativity
    dies
    Just like my inside
    I am dead inside

    i like that part. great job.
    sam