Through the eye,
But on it too.
You are the light
In every cast.
A blind lie,
Is to count too few.
Senses fight,
But color lasts.
Author notes
'color is the thematic metaphor'
A contest entry
- Color Me Quickly - 24 hour contest by Heart Sutra.
405 points, ended March 13, 2007, 16 entries
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hey this is a strong peom keep it up!!!
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Thank you very much!
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Interesting and scientific...great.
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