What if
the world was full of chocolate pudding
wouldn't that be great?
Chocolate pudding when you're sad
chocolate pudding when you're smiling
Chocolate pudding on your birthday
Chocolate pudding for dessert
Chocolate pudding in your tummy
Chocolate pudding in your mouth
I so love chocolate pudding
I think it would be great
But maybe
after chocolate pudding parties
after chocolate pudding baths
after chocolate pudding breakfast
after chocolate pudding lunch
maybe
just maybe
I'd be sick of chocolate pudding
just maybe
after all
A contest entry
- What Would Make the World a Better Place Contest by Spiritual Nature.
450 points, ended March 16, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This made me smile. I think after all that chocolate pudding, I'd get a little tired of it too.
But I believe it would definitely make the world a better place.
Great and refreshing topic, nice execution as well.
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GREAT
Awesome! I laughed so hard at this poem, it was great. I love chocolate pudding too.......allthough I'm not sure I like it THAT much! HAHAHA, great write. I enjoyed it!
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Of all the things I could think of to make the world a better place, chocolate pudding din't came to mind
Joyful, happy poem, well done
Maybe that's an underlying meaning, the world needs more joy, less frustration...
Anyway, I like this poem, I hope you win the contest
Greetz x
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oh, my stomach
I do like chocolate pudding but ugh, too much :-)
you made me laugh, kudos
best of luck in the contest
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mmmmmmmmmmm chocolate...... that is like the perfect world. nice job.
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The chocolate lovers would go crazy with joy. It just might make the world a better place. Great job, you made me laugh and that definitely makes the world a better place.
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So cute...
I like chocolate pudding too but ur right choco pudding forever could mean overkill for many but that would be so much less to worry about in comparison.
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