It's a Meth lab
Running with your
RED meanings lost in
Your bleak out look.
I must say
You lost me with
"I'm sorry"
Your BLUE flame
Dying inside your hollow lies.
The taste of bitter
Cold, hard, fantasies
Bit Me Inside your PURPLE lullabyes
Like the last broken smile.
You make me smile
With your GREEN death
Evil like your envies
Dying like your friends
I close my eyes
All I ever see
The blood from her red wrists
An opinion
Based on falacy && late night television
I fall asleep
With the tears in view
Blue like the ocean she long ago poisoned
She flows against the tide
And cries hollowly into the night.
Intense pleasure aside
I live in her controversial gazes
The thrill of the night and the lies
Listen to her
Beating the purple bruises in her skin
I feel her envy
Like I felt her nights ago
When the world was us
Back to being bulletproof
Her GREEN hate bleeds
My betrayal dry.
The agonies
Burned from extacy
Sucking up ash
Left from the past
Back when me && her
Rebelled our love to the world
Before I found him
Before she found her pills
We carved our love
With our lies
Author notes
I dont even know
about an old girlfriend
shes really bitter
but hey
her ignorance drops
my plain disgust dead
with silvery bullets of fck
A contest entry
- Color Me Quickly - 24 hour contest by Heart Sutra.
405 points, ended March 13, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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an intensely emotional write, a good poemand a good way to get feelings out too, very creative
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This is too long to qualify for the contest but I like the idea of using a bag of Skittles for a color poem.
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Wow this was good, but at first I didn't know what to make of it. I don't know if I'm still quite sure, but that may be because I have a headache. Good luck in the contest.
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