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Life after death

Life after Death
What is to become,
Of us when we die?
Is there a hell underground?
Or a heaven in the sky?
Where do we go?
Who do we see?
How do we get there?
What is the fee?
How do we come back to life?
Or dream forever more,
Can we still go to heaven,
If we break the law?
What about hell?
Is it blazing with fire?
And is it really truly dire?
I'm full of questions,
About when we die,
I'm just really curious
About when we say goodbye.

Please tell me what you think

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  • samcuy
    March 12, 2007
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    How do we get there?
    What is the fee?

    Can we still go to heaven,
    If we break the law?

    i really like those questions in the poem. i always wonder what it's like after death too.

    i like it alot, it flows really well. great job
    sam