Bold and bright
The color of passions in the night.
The ink of a poet's pen
Flowing with emotion
So sensual like a fire burning
Yet angry and spurning.
It feels the heart with longing
And feels it with hate
Both sides of the coin
Neither black nor white but both adjoined.
Red made of
Love and Hate.
Author notes
This is just my simple take on red. Hope you like it
A contest entry
- Color Me Quickly - 24 hour contest by Heart Sutra.
405 points, ended March 13, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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grasping red is a hard thing to do seeing it holds many intense emotions its a powerful piece here wonderful job.
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A well expressed write that shared both "good" and "bad" points which you explained well.
The wording of this write is most excellent.
Well done.
Love and Light.
~Raven Tears~ -
Well, red is certainly for passion. thank you for sharing...
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Nice
I liked this a lot. RED such a vibrant color for so much intense emotion. Nice work. ~Pamela
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I am both sides of the coin....
i love that line!
a very powerful piece, such alot expressed in such few words, good luck in the contest
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