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[x]Glamour-king[x]

Strip clubs, high-end bars
Movie stars, electric cars

Pretty in pink and pretty in punk
Disco balls and techno-funk

Living, breathing my own way
Sleeping, steeping, too high to play

Glittery-glam and pink hair dye
“Glamour-king?” Don’t ask why

Bring it on, I’ll smoke you all
Emo-screamo as you fall...


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  • aslam
    November 26
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    you rocks

  • MusicalNirvana x0x
    June 17, 2007
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    That was truly amazing and funny.


  • fallenangel671
    April 11, 2007

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    this was a good poem, i enjoyed reading it, its one of those thats awesome but i cant find a way to relate the title is good for the poem though, and as always i enjoy reading any of your poems.
    keep writing!!!
    ~Ashley~<3


  • x.digital.love.x
    March 20, 2007
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    oh babes, this simply rocks. love it.

    Strip clubs, high-end bars
    Movie stars, electric cars

    Pretty in pink and pretty in punk
    Disco balls and techno-funk

    favorite lines. great job, thanks for entering, and best of luck dollface.


  • NyteShade
    March 16, 2007
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    i like how your poems ryhme my fav lines would have to be the first ones. well done


  • HollyxHavok
    March 14, 2007
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    that's some pretty good wording... I LOVE IT!!


  • Crash Into Me
    March 13, 2007
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    want to be my glitter king??

    this was fucking sweet.

    god. i cant get over the fact that you write so well..

    mmmh hmmm..

    ive got to go tell the other dollies about you..
    i think they'll drool.

    doll face
    -alexsis


    • PlasticPrecious
      March 14, 2007
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      ill be your glitter king if you'll be my [queen]

      lol, i've always written this way....i just find it more interesting, lol.


      • Crash Into Me
        March 15, 2007
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        hee hee

        gosh you're sex-c.

        of course ill be your [queen]
        && baby doll;;
        im going to rock your world

        -alexsis


  • Chelsea dagger
    March 12, 2007

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    ha ha ha thats pretty funny. i liked it a lot. but personally this whole glitter glam thing makes me laugh. how many uf os actually live that way? maybe... maybe we should all be like panic at the disco. have you ever been to one of their concerts? i guess the whole glitter glam thing was totally owned by them. well i guess i'm just saying i like it.


  • KissMeGoodnight
    March 12, 2007
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    haha, you rock. must i say more?


  • Hello Love Goodbye
    March 12, 2007

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    Clever. I pretty much love the last lines. They cracked me up. Whether they were intended to or not.

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