Time-fractured visions
of color and light
Mem'ries of who you thought you were.
~Red anger~
~Black rage~
Constantly shifting
patterns and shapes
Building the present out of the past.
~Blue sorrow~
~Purple fright~
Light shining through
bright and alive
Blending and smoothing the painful shards.
~Yellow hope~
~Green serenity~
You are a kalidescope
one of a kind
Showing your fragilness to the world.
A contest entry
- ~ Kaleidoscope Redefining~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended March 19, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very clever, and refreshing to read something so different. I love the use of colors to describe moods/emotions, well done
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Quite an ingenious invention, your poetic kalidescope! Congrats on your GOLD and thank you so much for visiting my children's poem. God bless, ♥ Belle
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Wonderful Poem
CONGRATULATIONS ON THE GOLD!!!!!!!!! Your poem was a pleasure to read. I love the vivid imagery of all the colors. Great write. You take care
Sandy
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Thank you so much!
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Outstanding work Here
Very pleased to see this win /Gold, you have redefined and made it your own,
Congratulattions,
warm thoughts
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Thank you so, so much! This is my first gold and very much appreciated.
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Using the colors that one sees when looking in the Kaleidoscope was brilliant! Great penning! Thanks for sharing and best wishes,
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Thank you!
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wow, this is amazing. i really like the way you used the colors to portray emotions.
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Thank you, dearheart!
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ohhhhhh I like this love how you used colors to express
a wonderful job of redefining the word Kaleidoscope
Thanks for being creative And I agree truly we are all one of a kind,
Thanks for sharing,
warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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