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I am The Dark Wolf

I am the lone wolf that hides in the shade,
I am the lone wold that fights to survive,
I am the lone wolf that lives on the edge,
I am the might,
I am the lonely,
I am the wolf... 

A contest entry

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  • Lj-
    March 12, 2007

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    I like this very strong.


    In line two:

    "wold" should be "wolf"


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