Glitter injections
Lipo-ed hips
Botox
Lip-gloss tricks
Masterpiece
Scalpel please
Piece me together, throw on the glue
Toss me around, I’m black and blue
Crying in the corner, slicing up skin
Bleeding, can’t ever win
Gucci, Prada, Madonna, Fendi
So many ways that you can bend me
Score it; store it, in my mind
Please, please help me to unwind
Pink poodles and popsicle-lips
Ecstasy-clubs and hot-tub dips
Glittered lips and shadowed eyes
Little kid screams and animal cries
Find me in that self-centered womb
In that shallow pool full of angst and gloom…
Author notes
Ispirations:
Geoffrey Paris---"SUPERFABULUST"
Jeffree Star---"Plastic Surgery Slumber Party"
A contest entry
- *Glitter Tragedy For the Stars* by x.digital.love.x.
690 points, ended April 5, 2007, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥ Do You Bleed Glitter? ♥ by Dead Star--x.
450 points, ended March 22, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Through the eyes of a DragQueen!
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Ewh
why you taking stuff from Jeffree?! i bet he'd be pissed -
Jeffree Star is the queen of Myspace.
I love that hoe ♥
She's the sex. <33
I'm not to sure about the rhyming though.
But other than that, I love it.
I love drag queens too!
♥
~Princess of Shadows~ -
i really loved it <3
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this was an awesome poem i loved the part
Crying in the corner, slicing up skin
Bleeding, can’t ever win
this was my favorite part simply because of the emotion displayed in it, i loved the title as awell and thought that it fit the poem perfectly, i encourage you to keep writing!!!!!
~Ashley~<3 -
Awesome.I loved it all!
xoxo,
Your Dumpster Doll
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This is absolutely amazing. Really puts a face to pastic-surgery and the like.
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Ahhh! Take my (breath) away!
<3Amazing!<3
-Dani-
People in society are obbsessed with the way that they look...I wonder what they would do without a mirror LOL...
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That was very well put, so full of imagery. I love the way you made it rhyme, it made it even more amazing. Loved it.
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amazing im in love with it;
♥
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OH MY GOD I'M IN LOVE.
This was amazing.
Amazing amazing amazing.
Some of my fiction is inspired
by the same people, but I still
haven't found the words to put the
emotion into a poem.
This is perfect.
"Masterpiece
Scalpel please
Piece me together, throw on the glue
Toss me around, I’m black and blue...
...Gucci, Prada, Madonna, Fendi
So many ways that you can bend me"
Amazingg.
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nice nice nice nice... i dont know what to say here inm still reeling from all the awesomeness you have written and not believing that i could find such a poem! youre on the finalists list thanx for entering!
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wow loverly, this is sooper. this is greatfantasticamazing i looooove it! great job starbaby, thanks for entering!!!
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wow i can really feel this. i'm not a fan of rhyme. it really bothers me... but it works. and for my art class i work on fashion and trying to research it all of this stuff is really shoved in your face.
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yes your subject is great and one of my very favorites :-D but another great write, keep up the good work
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Your quite clever with your play on words. You remind me alot of x-AmountOfWords. And to anybody that should be a compliment because she is excellent and you prove to be too.
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Wow,have you got it right here,,Oh to be a star, and all that you pay in pain,and liposuction,face re-arranging you name it..I would rather be me thank you...Your rhyme is perfect and your flow great..and you have talked about a subject no one else has..that should be shared..If we could only love ourselves..Yes we might have to diet, or whatever but...what self punishment....A very good write!
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