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pt...The Floatingleaf

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i feel myself floating from the family tree

fading in senior years as i float

a leaf reveals my stature

the stem my life line

mapped  lines are creative and varied interest

outlined shape describes trails i have followed

color hues would be changes i have endured

the floating movement symbolizes time left

limiting accomplishments left to do

before i reach my destiny of the float

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  • Lj-
    March 12, 2007

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    This is very good. I love the imagery. This has such an airy feel to it.


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