Flawless dime
But…
Agatha unleashed
Names hide palms
Gritty oxidized
Putrid stone flesh
Original angry woman
Media belief
Right where you
want me
First witch’s cauldron
Catch a case
Symbol of mire
Unrelenting beneath
Hades boils over
Ogres perch atop
Rigid veined rocks
Mauls and pecks ear lobes
Tireless to chagrin
Claws and scratches
Till well, over done, alas…
“Rise atrocity”
“Rise lethal poisonous pride”
Stainless steel faces
Awaken the smell of red
Teeth sharpened on ugly
Taste new skin
Author notes
What I'm feeling underneath this sweetness lately.
A contest entry
- Who Are You... Tell me. by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 16, 2007, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow... this is very good. the way you have all of the lines all broken up really pulls you through the peice at a nice pace... yeah... keep up the good work
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Awesome!
A very powerfully packed well structured piece as well worded...You have skill, what can I say. Thanks for sharing you, and please pen on, I have this feeling you will, and do it well I might add!
Much love hun, your friend and fan, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo 
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I like this very much. Intense and strong. A voice underneath shouting; I like it.
Thank you for entering,
Good luck!
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Gasp-
I think I'll come back and comment after I read a second time
Powerful emotions exuded and Wow~
the "Rise Lethal Poisonous Pride"
Oy~
that is some serious energy~
but I know there are moments when a
*release* is necessary...
Magnificent release~
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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