My parents sat us down
On my sister’s
Bed
In the cheery room
Where we used to play
Barbies
And tell us the
Dreadful news
I didn’t dare
Expect
My sister sobs
“It isn’t
Fair!” she
Cries
As I shed a
Silent tear
No one notices
As I back
Away
Into the confines
Of my room
Where I
Weep
No one comes
No one
Cares
I always cry
Alone
A contest entry
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Comments
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amazing write. Makes me wonder what happened...
Nice ending, too: "I always cry alone" ...
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very nice...this is an amazing piece, it makes me wonder what happend, this does sound very real as, im guessing a true event happend, very nice poem...sad and a great cliffhanger poem, i soo want to know what happend!
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It's moving it's just like how i am feeling and it's so real.
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did this ever happen to you...because you make it sound so real
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good
Sooooooo wat was the issue hmmmmmm? -
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very helpful comment as usual
thanks mikee
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Vert touching!
Honestly,I feel for you ,I do... Definitely seemed as though it was written from the heart...
well done! thanks for entering my contest!
GRACE
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