Your words
are little pillows
that I lay beneath my cheek.
Your love
is like a paycheck
that I cash in once a week.
And in this bed of beauty
with my currency
aglow
I rest assured just knowing
you're the only one
I owe.
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Delightful -- lol
Terrific fun write
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LOL
This is hilarious, but pain is what makes humor work, so I hope you are not all that well acquainted with it (pain, I mean).
Interesting write. I laughed out loud when I read the ending of this.
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That was so cute, it put a smile
on my face!
Keep it up!
Stace -
awesome man.
you never lose your touch. i plan to go back and read over some of your oldies within these next few days. i need a fix of your stuff.
j -
Short, sweet and yet saturated with so much meaning it brings to mind a flood of images and thoughts
Your style is always a treat to read, I wish I got here more often to do just that!
A truly well penned piece of poetry.
s and best wishes always... ~Genie~
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This was really sweet. Keep it up!
Stacey:
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This seems toned down for you, and I like it. The title fits really well. Great write once again.
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