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On a floor drowning in ashes,
Seeping vomit and beer and laughs.
Endless vomit.
A thousand voices, all proclaiming
A thousand friends all abandoning.
An empire of rumors, unrelenting.
Nothing to say, but a cloud of smoke,
And it all blows away.

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"I am tired, I am weary. I could sleep four thousand years."

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  • stella pistolas
    March 14, 2007
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    the smoke blows away, but not me.

    no abandoning here.

  • sugarstar
    March 13, 2007
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    you can sleep, and awake in my arms




    i'll never abandon you. never.