Friends
once trusted
now stolen thoughts
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow..amazing how much can be packed in 6 words.


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Ah..I can relate to this one a lot, and it does hurt. Not sure if I really believe in a true and real solid best friend type of friendship anymore, 'cause...no matter what..still get hurt somehow. Anyways, well done on this one, my favorite so far. ~
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well done !!!!!!!!!!!!
excellent strong powerful message
Tracey


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thank you for entering into this contest. Three lines explained well the hurt of a friendship broken and feeling betrayed. I wish you the best in the contest,
reenie



