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Lost Within Myself

Sitting here looking at the past

Feeling the stings of the wounds that I'm opening

Feeling them tear me down

Leaving me in tears and pain from what i lost

Yet for everything i have lost

I have gained something

But no matter what possessions i gain

They will never make up for the love i lost

So now i choose to hide from the world

Within this darkness that has engulfed me

Ill hide here for now an nurse my wounds

Letting the darkness fill me to the brim

And once my cup runs over

I will use what i have learned to end it all

And show the world that

No longer exist

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  • MiseriaCantare13
    May 2, 2007

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    This is a really impressive write, very dark and above all, poetic. I understand how this feels and how crappy it feels. I hope writing helps, although I know sometimes it does nothing.