The mystery of everyone's life is love, right?
Finding a one and only to hold you all through the night
I wanna put Love on the spot
She love's me, He love's me not
It seams no one is happy when they are single
And is why we go to clubs and church to mingle
Why is falling in love a real necessity of life
Head over heals adorably as man and wife
I mean come on is love real?
Or just something some pretend to feel?
Is there a greater being up there who is planning our fate
Or a lesser being down here trying to horn us in as bait
I mean is it fate that would bring me to you
Maybe just a luck happening between us two
I wanna look this Love right in the eye and say,
"We're gonna fight, but you'll make a way.
I'm gonna scream and she will probley bite,
Wanna let go and start new but you can make things right.
A simple thing like a hug or kiss will do fine
Love, know this one thing, I am hers and she is mine
Do what you gotta do; come, stay, go, or leave,
Because the Love I feel is real; I BELEIVE!"
Author notes
Okay so I know it didn't flow very well but well it has been a while. I hope I can start writing more. My head is not where I want it right now but well like I said maybe I can start writing more lol!!!! Pray, hope, wish that I can get it back so it does alot better than this one oh and thanks for reading
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this one seems a bit more serious than other's that you have done but I'm glad you've got a better connection. I'm sure you'll be writing more! -
you have written a very condensed poem. you need to revise it to bring a flow in it. I felt as if I was reading a poem by Bacon.You have emotions only u need to revise..
I'm gonna scream and she will {probley} bite,
Pzl go through the spelling the curly brackets.
Best of luck.
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I like the questions asked within this poem..yes the flow is off, but the meaning behind the words are good...Love is real by the way...you will find this out when you do ever get married...have children and grandchildren..and still look into your loves eyes and smile..its a wonderful feeling...slow down your life a bit and maybe it will happen ...nice work for not writting for awhile...thanks for sharing
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Awesome ! True love is a divine drink. At least to me. 'I am hers and she is mine' ... that is very true.
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a very interesting write from you. it sounds like there are two who love each other but refuse to admit it to me. i don't know. maybe it is just me and where my head space is tonight. thank you for sharing this with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you. viyanna rosemarie
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