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Queen

She's a *g.l.a.m.o.r* +[queen]+
dressed in .b_l_a_c_k. && -b.l.u.e-;;
.d.i.r.t.y..p.r.e.t.t.y. ~baby~
{c|o|v|e|r|i|n|g} ^up^ just for you

~C~a~r~m~i~n~e~ ink >>tells
the story's tale<<;
of a girl _lost_ && a.l.o.n.e,
a life +d_e_s.t.i.n_e_d+ to _f_a_i_l_

/B/r/o/k/e/n/ {g.l-a-s.s} >>s-c-r-a-p-e-s<< her arm;
the ~a.l.c.o.h.o.l~ burns on t-h-r-o-u-g-h--
She's [->holding<-] back panicked tears,
none of you .e.v.e.r. knew

The |d|a|r|k| of night isn't [>enough<]
to [--hide--] her from mother's \b\e\a\s\t\
S-c-r-e-a-m-s encouraged are |k|e|p|t|
_s_i_l_e_n_t_ through >>g.r.i.t.t.e.d<< teeth

Avoiding +[used]+
n.e.e.d.l.e.s && c_o_n_d_o_m_s
s
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t
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r
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d
a c r o s s the floor,
she >>grabs<< her ♥ && ~s~o~u~l~
&& >>e s c a p e s out through the |door|

She's lost in a (.sw.a.rm.) of ]--addiction--[;
life has >>t_h_r_o_w_n>> her to the side
-D-r-u-g-s- && ~a~l~c~o~h~o~l~ not by [_self_infliction_],
yet she wears both m.a.r.k.s with no [[pride]]

*G~l~i~t~t~e~r* s_t_a_i_n_s her eye lashes,
though her ]]outer[[ a.c.t is ^t|o|u|g|h^
She could play a .d.r.a.m.a. .q.u.e.e.n.,
what with l i v i n g it so >>rough<<

.T.r.y. as she might to go --unnoticed--,
two men can see her {{i-n-n-e-r}} (c.o.r.e)
But can they -]unlock[- the .s.i_n_f_u.l. secrets
of step .d.a.d.d.y.'s. ((lit-tle)) *w~h~o~r~e*?

There's a [flu]-[f.l.u.t-t.e.r] in her voice
when that leader .t.o.t.e.s. his #-x-gun-x-#
She d i s a g r e e s with his ->->actions<-<-,
but |h|a|n|g|i|n|g| with him might be ..f.u.n..

&& he s e e s it in her ~e~y~e~s~,
&& he f e e l s it in his ♥[soul]♥
_L_i_t_t_l_e_ brother [[d.i.s.g.u.i.s.e.s]] his feel,
though both would [--keep--] her \whole/

She's a $-winning-$ *b.e.a~u.t.y* ♥{queen}♥,
.f.r.a.g.i.l.e. on all the [[i_n_s_i_d_e_s]];;
__t.o.u.c.h__ up on her -c-u-t-s- && b/r/u/i\s\e\s,
kiss♥ away all that she ((h.i.d.e.s))

Translation:

She's a glamor queen
dressed in black and blue;
dirty pretty baby
covering up just for you

Carmine ink tells
the story's tale;
of a girl lost and alone,
a life destined to fail

Broken glass scrapes her arm;
the alcohol burns on through
She's holding back panicked tears,
none of you ever knew

The dark of night isn't enough
to hide her from mother's beast
Screams encouraged are kept
silent through gritted teeth

Avoiding used needles and condoms
scattered across the floor,
she grabs her heart and soul
and escapes out through the door

She's lost in the swarm of addiction;
life has thrown her to the side
Drugs and alcohol not by self infliction,
yet she wears both marks with no pride

Glitter stains her eye lashes,
though her outer act is tough
She could play a drama queen,
what with living it so rough

Try as she might to go unnoticed,
two men can see her inner core
But can they unlock the sinful secrets
of step daddy's little whore?

There's a flutter in her voice
when that leader totes his gun
She disagrees with his actions,
but hanging with him might be fun

And he sees it in her eyes,
and he feels it in his soul
Little brother disguises his feel,
though both would keep her whole

She's a winning beauty queen,
fragile on all the insides;
touch up on her cuts and bruises,
kiss away all that she hides

Author notes

Inspired by my character, Kira, and Victoria of Aragon's two characters, Sharazon and Neonnone. ♥

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Comments

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    So sad. Read your stories of Kira and yes I can relate to how this is like Kira, as she is a very lone and saddened [demon, or half demon?]. Beautifully wrote though.

    • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
      July 11, 2007
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      Kira has been my main muse for many months now. She's my favorite character ever created and if you've enjoyed my stories of her, then I am glad and hope you've been thoroughly entertained by them.
  • darrylblacksr
    March 14, 2007
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    I click on this and at first I didn't get it, then I read it again I liked it and it seems like being trapped in life's trials and tribulations hope to find the safer path in this journey. I thank you for sharing it with me And I wish you luck in your challenge


  • Dead Star--x
    March 14, 2007
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    youve got your punctaution down xp but it loo9ks like you got tired by the end.. hehe thats okay i do the same thing sometimes xp
    well i added you to the finalists list thanx for entering & good luck!!!!
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    • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
      March 14, 2007
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      I actually got a little carried away with the punctuation, so I tried to tone it down a bit. I'm glad you liked my poem.

  • Victoria of Aragon
    March 12, 2007

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    Awh'! xD I can totally see Shar and Neo fighting over her, lmao. =\ Andandandand, this is so pretty. ♥ I'm coming to adore this style of poetry, heh'.

    Best of luck, dear.


    • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
      March 12, 2007
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      Lol. X3 I wonder how Kira would handle two men fighting over her. XD And and and and....thank you...and....yey! I've created an adoration treeeend~

  • Blazing White Wolf
    March 11, 2007
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    .;

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