Is it possible to fly
Way up high in the sky?
Did you really think that you
Could ever actually make me blue?
Why do you want to make me cry?
Your love for me is just a lie.
When "I love you" I heard you say
Boy, did you ever make my day.
I used to think we could be something
But now I knew we'll always be nothing.
Now that I know your love is fake
I'll never again put my heart at stake
My life before you used to be great
But not so much after this sad fate
Honey, I loved you, but never more
Because of you my heart is sore.
Author notes
Ok, I just found this from a long time ago!! I don't think I've ever really actually felt this way, and it obviously seems as if I forced the rhyming. Well, I'm not going to change it much unless someone has some amazing suggestions.
Please tell me what you think
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Hey sis. Long time no see. this piece makes me sad and that's why I like it so much. It makes me feel and shares a burden. and a shared burden is easier to bear. thanks for posting best wishes and good waves. ~Tai-san the 13th poet.
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hey! this poem isn't bad. It's really good. I like the rhyme, it seems just a little bit forced but that's ok. All in all this was a very good poem I liked it.
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wow i like the rhyme.... this is hot thanks for sharing..
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