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A True Freind

I'm here to catch when you fall

And I will fight; backs toward the wall

I will dry your every tear

And I will conquer all your fears

I will walk this narrow path

All for you, on your behalf

And if you need a freindly smile

Then I shall lend mine for a while...


To be a freind in you makes me

All that I could want to be

And when the storms of life shall come

I'll be here, and pain will numb

Never should you be afraid

When I am here your hurt will fade

I'm your freind, and dont you see?

I love you, you're a freind in me!...








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  • redrumdog31
    May 2, 2007

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    I loved this one espesally at 'If you need a friendly smile, Then I shall lend mine for a while.' thats what I call a true friend.


  • militsu
    March 12, 2007

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    f%%king awsome

    you really have captured the feeling and truth about being a real friend
    and i must admitt you did a really F##king good job


  • CalmBeforeTheStorm
    March 11, 2007
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    haha..this rocks...good goin on da happy! happy-ness rocks. and it has good rhythm and stuff too..

  • in-the-twilight
    March 11, 2007

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    This is sooooooo great! I love it and I know the feeling incredibly well with my friends! A good friend always understands this feeling! Great write! Loved it! Rock on! xoxo Meg