even though you're not here physically
you're here, within my heart
as i hope i am in yours
even though we're far apart
i encourage that time to go by faster
for i don't know how much longer i can wait
i'm so excited that i can't stand it
just to see your smiling face....
i long to embrace you tightly
feel your strong arms pull me close
kiss your lips, so soft and warm
this is what i want the most
i miss you terribly
an aching pain within my heart
although it hurts, i'll bare it
for it means we're not meant to be apart
so i'll stay here in waiting
as that time draws near
you're the only one for me
i love you so much my dear
A contest entry
- Love is hard, when you're so far away.... by ScarletLetter.
550 points, ended March 26, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Is In The Air!! by Mrs Snead.
450 points, ended March 23, 2007, 16 entries
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525 points, ended April 22, 2007, 30 entries
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375 points, ended September 14, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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I really loved this poem so much!
thanks so much for putting it in my contest! good luck and best wishes.
xo
kandy -
This is really really a nice and passionate one. Good job!!!!!!!!
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That is a beautiful piece...Thank you for entering and good luck.
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I love this! Youre a finalist in my contest! Wish ya the best!
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omgoo'ness!
it's so....
agggh! i loved it to pieces!
thanks so much for entering <3
much love and prayer,
~*Jess*~
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Very nice romantic poem. I really like the first verse - it pulls you on in. I hope you always have that kind of love - where you just can't wait to be with the other person.
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chuckie, what the heck are you talking about!?
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........you know what i think already...
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aw this is sweet.
I know the feeling.
great job darling<33
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yay! *claps hands and runs to hug carlie*
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