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His Name

I wonder what his name is-
the one who haunts my mind
with his lies

Bitterness is his name-
anger at the world
bringing a spirit of unrest

Depression is his name-
tears and sadness daily
feeling of inadequacy

Fear is his name-
causing me to tremble
desiring isolation

Pride is his name-
making me immune to
feelings of others

Despair is his name-
no options before me
loss of all hope

Longing is his name-
discontent where I am
searching for peace

Mourning is his name-
joy is dead within me
missing what never was

Author notes

there is a Christian auther, Frank Peretti, who writes about the demons and the way they torment people's minds, giving them names and personalities. i was thinking about that concept and wondering if the demons who bothered me were named what they would be called.

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  • SacredHope
    September 16, 2007

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    This is a cool poem! Funny, I was thinking about Frank Peretti as I was reading this. I guess great minds think alike.