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*The Singer*

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(Photo by Grant Johnson of Kelly Johnson playing "The Rose," and "Me and my Bobby Mcgee."

The Singer

NOTE: --2009--My mother just received her five-year-survival pin for staying in remission from ovarian cancer for five years! She won the battle! Yes! Thank you, God!

(2008--My mother is now in remission for advanced ovarian cancer, going on four years now. Yeah! She has a five-year survival rate. All tests came back negative for her four-year mark. At five years, she's considered cured! This is dedicated to her, my precious mother. At her five-year-anniversary, you'll be reading this tribute again. Be blessed!)
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Second to the youngest of a family of eight,
This little girl loved to sing.
Relatives, friends, even strangers too,
Gathered round to hear her voice ring.

Often, they'd stand her on a table or chair
And she'd coyly oblige to entertain,
Lifting sweet vocals, stroking song after song,
Reciting lyrics in an unbroken chain.

When she grew up and bore babes of her own,
She'd sing to them sweet lullabyes.
Infants soothed by this mother's sweet gift,
Found mystical lands beneath sleeping eyes.

As children grew, songs instilled lessons,
Bringing laughter, while others brought tears.
Tiny hearts pumped with the birth of compassion,
Like "Chariots of Fire" fueled by love through the years.

Carousels, silver moons, monkeys with combs,
Alligators bathing in our tub,
Sent us giggling when it shared a chocolate eclair
With three naked men singing "Rubadub-dub!"

At times Mom tugged a song from the stars,
As if prompted, such lyrics to share.
I never really listened to lectures so much,
These songs are what caused me to care.

"Somewhere over the Rainbow," helped me believe,
Like a bird, I could fly too.
Her voice lent belief, lyrics gave me wings,
And, in nightdreams and daydreams, I flew!

"Que Sera, Sera, What will be, will be . . ."
Serene vocals simply helped me comprehend,
The future is not always our's to see,
Yet never fear what's around that next bend.

In church, my mother's range rose angelic,
Adding heaven's gift to every song sung.
At home, we all learned the simplicity of life,
As we all joined in for sing-along fun.

As seasons unfold, her hum misses now and then,
Still her songs dance like prisms of light.
Translucent harmony like a rainbow's hue
Each note soars like colors in flight.

She'll never stop singing and neither will I;
This legacy she didn't keep as her own.
I've added tones to our rainbow of song,
Singing colors of harmony and tone.

At each rainbow's end, generations have grown,
More voices lend rich color to life.
As babes sleep in peace and the old reminisce
We've found solace in turmoil and strife.

I've learned more from the words of songs sung to me,
Than any scolding or lecture or talk.
The greatest lesson I learned which I, too, passed on:
It's not the journey that matters most . . . it's the walk.

(Sing to your children. They'll never forget it.)

Author notes

Sing, always, even if you don't think you can, because if you believe it, you can! Even if you're the only one listening. Music is a universal language that communicates beyond what we as mere humans can conceive. Love, light and peace!--Kel
Written June 30th, 2003

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  • madimar
    September 24
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    beautiful

    I love your poem. So much from the heart.


  • FelinePoetess
    September 24

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    that was so sweet and lovely.full of emotions,and since im an incorrigible lover of music,i can understand.even my father used to sing to sleep when i was a little girl,and i rememner the words clearly


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    September 24
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    this is beautiful and touching write


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 24

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    Hi Kelly,
    This is still a beautiful poem and please convey my best wishes to your Mother on winning the battle. I remember this in our contest and it still hits home ... music is a part of life.

    Thank you for featuring this and allowing us to read it.

    Love
    Sue

    P.S.I love the photo of you

  • Bob Fox
    September 23

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    Memories

    And the true meaning of a mothers love flows through with your wonderful words. May mom always be blessed and oh yes I now know Doris Day is smiling from up above. Wonderful write poet.


  • My Chronos gold member
    September 23

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    Very sweetly written with much love. I enjoyed reading and am thankful you took the time to share.

  • tessa poetry
    September 23

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    I loved this poem.

    and I am totally jealous I cannot sing a note at all and my mother died when I was four.  I loved the small touches of love that you put into this poem.  It tells of all the joy that you shared with her over the years.  good job.


  • bquartey
    September 23

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    I guess this is a sort of a autobiographical poem. I have always been a song writer but i hope that one day ill be able to write like this. I agree with the last line "The greatest lesson I learned which I, too, passed on:
    It's not the journey that matters most . . . it's the walk." well all i no is dat wen i have children and dey r smart enough to know, ill tell dem that. :


  • Graciee
    September 23

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    WOWZERS.

    Oh my god.

    Truly inspirational. Amazing. I am a singer/songwriter, and would love to be able to write like you. Your words are wonderful.


    Keep up the amazing work.


  • marandah gold member
    September 23

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    Oh My Word!

    You have just painted the parent I aspire to be! Thank you so much for this. I can relate to this poem - although we were a reserved family, no standing on stools in our house, but, yes, I remember well a couple of songs my mother sang to me.

    Now I am a singer/songwriter :-) But I've never looked at teaching life lessons this way before.

    Thank you.

    I am just going to give my kids a huge hug now!

    I had to chuckle though - I remember how, when I was a little girl, I used to cringe when my Mother would freely sing aloud in the supermarket. Now I find myself singing in public with the same unihibited manner...and I hear my own kids whispering under their breath "ssshhhh"


    • kvwriter silver member
      September 23
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      I'm so pleased to learn you not only enjoyed my poem but that you are able to open up and teach life lessons this way, through music and song. I had to laugh when you described how you cringed when your mother sang in public. And, now you do the same. You kids will do it too--they just don't know it yet. They will also know one day how blessed they are to have you!

      Best of luck to you with your singing/songwriting career! And thank you so much for taking the time to read my tribute to my mother. She's pretty special to me. Onward . . .

      --Kelly

  • trekker02
    September 22

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    Your feelings for your mother are made very clear in this poem, and I like how you tied in a lot of familiar old songs to emphasize what resonated throughout your life.

    • kvwriter silver member
      September 22
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      Thank you, trekker--I'm glad you enjoyed this poem tribute to my mother. She's not only a cancer survivor, but such a beautiful human being in every sense imaginable. You are greatly appreciated! I read her every response posted here which often brings tears to her eyes. Thank you so much for taking the time to hear me.
      --Kelly


  • rollingzen
    September 22
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    sing!


  • hugh wyles silver member
    September 16

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    Dear Kelly,

    Having sung in church choirs and most of the great choral masterpieces with our City choirs, I commend the words of your Author's Note. To sing is undoubtedly good for the soul, the mind and the heart. I learned more about music from my participation in choirs than from my lectures at University, with private tutors or from mater-classes. I was a basso profundo.
    Your poem, though a personal reminiscence and reflection, provides the reader with
    happy images of a loving family succession which you share joyfully.
    Thankyou for sharing this aspect of your life. I must say that, from Grant's photograph, you are stunningly beautiful. WOW!!
    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh.

    • kvwriter silver member
      September 22
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      Thank you, Hugh, for taking the time to read this tribute to my mother. Music has always affected me profoundly from childhood on up, as it has my mother. She just received her "Five-year Survival" pin for making her five-year mark in remission. I am so relieved! God bless you, Hugh!
      Love,
      Kelly

  • Bob Fox
    March 23, 2008
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    Well

    Though I have read this beauty before it still brings such joy to my heart and always it shall. Mom has truly cultured a wonderful flower { you }


  • HaileeDear
    March 23, 2008

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    Well for one the picture is beautiful, and such a beautiful piece to go alone with it. It was written with grace, as do you(is it you in the pic?) look in the picture.

    • kvwriter silver member
      March 23, 2008
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      Thank you.

      I appreciate the read and the comment on this tribute to my mother. Yes, that is me in the pic, taken by my husband.

      Appreciate you stopping by.
      Kelly


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Kelly this tribute to your Mother is beautiful I cannot express enough how much of a true angel to her you are. I can't remember if i commented on this poem but if I did I am again. After loosing my own father just over a year ago now I know the worries that yourself and your family have and are going through and my prayers are with you always for a seeedy recovery for your Mother to return to full health and begone these darkest of days forever more. My hearts with you all always Brian.

    • kvwriter silver member
      March 22, 2008
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      Thank you so much, Brian. I appreciate you taking the time to read this very special and personal tribute to my mother.

      She's heading to five years in remission and will be considered cured then. In my eyes and belief, she's already cured. Thank you and bless you my dear friend.

      Kel

  • lojol
    March 17, 2008

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    nice to read about music it does communicate many things to us. And so does this poem another poem of yours I enjoyed reading. I usaly like to read poems out loud I guess they are kinda like music in a way to. We usaly have a music night at the shop my two uncles play guitar and my grandfauther the harmonica. And they have some good musicision freinds that come over to. It seems like a lot healthyer way of spending time just listeing to them play.

    • kvwriter silver member
      March 17, 2008
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      I'm glad you enjoyed this poem of mine, "The Singer," which is a tribute to my mother who conquered cancer. Over four years now! Yeah!

      I love singing, Reese, and music has always been such a part of who I am and what I'm about. I need music very much. It's healing somehow.

      Yes, it is healthy and I wish I could watch your uncles and grandfather play their instruments. We have harmonica too in my family, and guitar and fiddles and piano.

      My favorite instrument is the voice though. It's unmatched.

      Thanks for reading my tribute here.

      Kelly


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    I adore this! This made me smile so much. The best gift someone can share is music. The human voice can relax a restless soul in a way that is purely magical. As so a lovely instrument does as well.

    This was very heart warming.
    Makes me proud to sing all the time...whenever I want! Even in unseemly places at times, haha.
    The way music is a gift to the world this poem is a gift to music.

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~

    • kvwriter silver member
      March 1, 2008
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      Thank you!

      I am so pleased my words made you smile. I couldn't help but chuckle when you said you sing, "Even in unseemly places at times, haha."

      I do too. Just can't help it.

      You are a lovely person.

      --Kel

  • Bob Fox
    March 1, 2008
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    Wow

    I am truly touched by those wonderful write. Your mom is one special lady & very lucky to have you as her daughter. I am sure the love goes beyong words and the music will be forever sweet


  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Wonderful! A really uplifting piece and a joy to read. However although I sing to my children all the time, mostly they try to hit me these days!

    All the best and looking forward to reading your entries in the Finale

    Jeff and Sue


    • kvwriter silver member
      February 1, 2008
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      Thank you so much! Looking forward to the finale.--Kel


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 25, 2008

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    This is a beautiful tribute to your Mom. I also sing, and made up new lyrics to songs to sing to my son when he was little. That's probably where I developed my sense of rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed the detail and images in this piece. Your Mom's a remarkable woman! I pray that she goes all the way and grabs that cure.

    Unfortunately, I lost my Mom 2years ago (January 31 is the anniversary) to lymphoma. By the time the disease was caught, it was too advanced to fight. I've written several poems about her.

    • kvwriter silver member
      January 25, 2008
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      I am so sorry to learn about your precious mother and to learn that the eve of the new year is the anniversary. Goodness! My heart goes out to you! I will be reading your tribute poems to your own mother. Thank you for stopping by to learn a bit about my own mother. I love her more than what can even be defined. Thank you for the prayers that she makes her five-year-survival cure. I'm believing she's going to make it.

      We just never know about life and what's around that next corner. I'm praying for you. I'm already loving the heart you have. And your spirit. You are beautiful! Be blessed.
      Love,
      Kelly


  • Legend silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    I have to admit it was the love of musical lyrics that first got me into writing poetry.I guess it could be those long forgotten lullaby's that plant such feeling in our brains.A wonderful look back on clearly a magical time.Excellent


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    January 21, 2008

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    Life in reflection comprehended!

    Oh, Kelly. This has such mass psyche in it that it oozes with wisdom!

    You and I must be soul syllables! I was raised with music and performing too. My Mother was in a trio that peformed in the USO. She had songs that shaped our inner beings and gave us such esteem. ( she did the 'tango' with other emotions like her temper..lol, but love succeeded in measure!).

    "As seasons unfold, her hum misses now and then,
    Still her songs dance like prisms of light.
    Translucent harmony like a rainbow's hue
    Each note soars like colors in flight." <----- my favorite part. I'hear', see, and smell these lines.

    P.S. Your picture is beautiful and I have to giggle at the fact that when I performed with the guitar, those two songs were first on my repetoire! WOwee.
    "The Rose" ( in C)
    " Bobby McGee" (in G).
    I have to give this a big upclap JUST for the
    beautiful layers with all the dressed up words.
    Thank you for your heart that reminds us all of
    what a wonderful Mother should be!F:

    • kvwriter silver member
      January 21, 2008
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      Awww.

      Thank you so much, D; I'm so pleased you enjoyed this and could relate! It touched your heart and helped you reflect on your own journey even up to this point. I sure don't believe in coincidences and you sure showed the parallels existing between us, in us, all around us. How wonderful is this? Wow! I'm stunned right now.

  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    Excellent

    This was a beautiful Tribute to your Mother in this emotional time you are going through. I lost my Father to lung cancer March 14th last year and understand just how frightening these times can be. I wish you and your family all the best and Pray that your Mother continues on her road to recovery with the success she has seen so far. God bless you all Brian.

    • kvwriter silver member
      January 21, 2008
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      Thank you so much!

      Brian, thank you for such a warm and understanding comment concerning a very real and difficult time. I'm so sorry to learn about your father. And I know you and yours were frightened and are still in healing phases. I'll keep you and yours in my prayers. Be safe, healthy and blessed. Always.--Kel


  • Ellis gold member
    January 18, 2008
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    The essence of your mother clearly comes through

    Well written tribute.
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    • kvwriter silver member
      January 18, 2008
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      Thank you, Ellis. You would just love my mom. She's precious! This world wouldn't be the same without her. Be blessed!--Kel


  • melphleg gold member
    January 10, 2008
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    Nice tribute

    Very nice. I enjoyed this. My heart felt warmth as I read and heard some of the songs in my head. A wonderful tribute to your mom.
    My dad had colon cancer and is a survivor too, so I can relate somewhat. I love my dad and am thankful he is still around too.

  • juno0404
    January 9, 2008

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    It is a beautiful tribute, and I wish you and your MOm the best.
    You have such beautiful memories,you are blessed.


  • Tripp gold member
    January 9, 2008

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    Beautiful Tribute

    From one song-smith to another, so very very touching and feelings of love jump from your words. My Grandmother used to sing to me as did my mother, and I have sang to and with mine and my grandchildren too. I enjoy so much reading lyrics created by love. As for me I am but a "Pilgrim Poet" (title of one of my works) and an old saloon singer, so I know to magic that can come from songs we sing. Again great write and if you got a minute, check out one of mine titled
    "The Legend of the Don't Drop Inn.". You should get a chuckle from it.

  • Tecohe
    January 9, 2008

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    Your poem, a testament to poetry

    As well as your mother's special place on this earth. Her music is her healing, each note and melody an elixir for what ails her. Her music, a gift she must give to herself and others. Your poetry is obviously your gift and I thank you for it.
    Light to your mother's continued healing.
    Tecohe


  • QuarryGirl
    January 8, 2008

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    Very Nice. My favorite stanza:

    Carousels, silver moons, monkeys with combs,
    Alligators bathing in our tub,
    Sent us giggling when it shared a chocolate eclair
    With three naked men singing "Rubadub-dub!"

    This made me smile and "see" your words come alive.

    Very happy about your Mom, a dread ful disease that took Gilda Radner and Madeliene Kahn, glad your mother beat it.

    Keep writing, I'll read more.

  • mmook
    January 8, 2008
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    thanks for sharing


  • wings from god 28
    December 19, 2007

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    wow

    hat a beautiful piece. i mean there are no words to describe this one. there is o0nly one word that is close to it and that is execellent. this piece is just awesome i want to keep reading it over and over again. it actually brought tears to my eyes. you did such a great job. you have a talent and that is writeing.i wish i could write like this. your words you put them together great. thank you for such a great piece it was beautiful just beautiful.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 6, 2007

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    Wow. That was truly a beautiful poem. Such a touching tribute. The emotion was strong and the imagery was great. Excellent!
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 4, 2007

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    I've learned more from the words of songs sung to me,
    Than any scolding or lecture or talk.
    The greatest lesson I learned which I, too, passed on:
    Tis not the journey that matters most . . . it's the walk.



    This is amazing piece my friend..what a great pleasure you gave me providing me such a pleasant write my friend...I love the pace and the concept of the verse here bringing a kind of peace and the soothing effect of the music of life here..I loved the structure and the mode effecting somewhere inside about the universal flow of the life ..you have touched the depth and touched the beauty of the message..


  • Asylaarix
    July 30, 2007

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    *Tear* This was *Sniff* The most gorgeous poem ... I have ever read in my entire life ... My mother too ... is falling ill of Lung Cancer ... COPD ... and I live every day as though it were her last ... I love her more then anything ... she too ... sang to me ... even before I was born ... she would hold her tummy and sing ... and sometimes I feel I can remember her doing so ... As strange as that may sound ... You have put so much emotion ... so much love ... and so much energy into this piece ... I am truly honored to have read this piece ... Thank you so much for letting us read this ... *Tear* I am truly crying so hard ... I cannot breath ... It is hard for em to see ... I loved this ... and I would love to bookmark this poem if it is okay with you ... You are a truly talented indivdual ... and I just love you to pieces already ... Much Love ... SparkehKiss


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 22, 2007

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    Wow this is amazing. I'm sorry to hear that your mom had cancer, but it's good to hear she's in remission. This poem tells a great story! Keep it up=]


  • kooleyes
    July 16, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful and touching piece of poetry. I am glad to hear that your mother is in remission. Thanks for the read and keep on writing.


  • Slightly Toxic
    July 14, 2007

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    I hope you've shared this with your mother,
    she'd definitely be proud.
    Such a lovely write,
    makes me want to have known the woman it's dedicated to.


  • Mansoor
    July 9, 2007

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    Hey man...!!! you are surely a great poet and I love the amazing write..the imagery is beautiful and strong and is very deep!! it rhymed good too at some places which was the best part..The lyrics make this one of more importance and this one is just amazing.
    this is a great job, and i look forward to read more of yours. ANd do take a look at my work too, i wud be very thankful to u for this act of kindness best of luck for more!!!
    God bless,
    Love,
    -Mansoor


  • CinematicInk
    June 17, 2007
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    truly beautiful. a wonderful tribute to a mother and her music.


  • anime-demonica
    June 17, 2007
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    I've learned more from the words of songs sung to me,
    Than any scolding or lecture or talk.
    The greatest lesson I learned which I, too, passed on:
    Tis not the journey that matters most . . . it's the walk

    music is the thing that will help eveyone i love the write


  • StrangeJules
    June 14, 2007
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    the child becomes the mother, who brings a child who will also become a mother.
    glad to hear your mother is in remission, wonderful news. My mother wasnt one of the lucky ones, lung cancer took her almost a year ago, still miss her very minute of every day.
    Revel in your mum, rejoice in her love.
    jules xx


  • Redstormy gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    touching

    Wow my mom used to sing that song to me and my sisters! I have a poem about that somewhere. I'm so sorry your mom has suffered cancer. This is a beautiful dedication and Kelly you are beautiful.


  • Cynt
    January 21, 2007

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    Ive already commented here, but after reading your author page, ive discovered that the photo and your face image are of you created by your hubby!! I love it, that is amazing, what an awesome pair you make. I love the photograph, its breathtaking! You work it!lol
    Once again i love this poem, and the artwork. !!


  • Cannonsfire
    January 19, 2007
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    This is very beautiful and the joy of music and a song to the heart and spirit can lift it from the reality and send it soaring. I sing all the time, just love to hear a melody, it gives me wings to fly out of the ordinary. This is truly an inspiring dedication and so well done.

    • kvwriter silver member
      January 19, 2007
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      You are BEAUTIFUL!

      My mom is smiling and she's still in remission. She has incredible courage, and I sense that in you! Keep doing what you're doing because you are, honestly, BEAUTIFUL! Be blessed!--Kel


    • kvwriter silver member
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you1

      You fly, soar and swing way out of the ordinary. I'm believing in you!--Kel

  • Cynt
    January 19, 2007
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    touching

    i love it, you really have skill, and what a wonderful way to make your mom smile, surely this write will!
    Its beautiful, a word i dont often use about poetry, since i usually like it dark, but this is, BEAUTIFUL.
    keep surviving the fight, and keep the courage to write!
    agape-cynt


  • Poetdontknowit
    January 19, 2007

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    AWESOME

    I TRULY ADORED YOUR GREAT WRITE YOU HAVE PENNED HERE. MY HUSBAND IS A MUSICIAN, HE'S PLAYING HIS GUITAR AND SINGING AS WE SPEAK. MUSIC ROCKS!
    KEEP ON PENNING
    POETDONTKNOWIT

    • kvwriter silver member
      January 19, 2007
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      So True!

      A poet doesn't know it, but thank you for your wonderfully uplifting comment. You are so appreciated! And, keep the music going!--Kel

  • kvwriter silver member
    January 19, 2007
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    I just want my mom to make it. I've lost a lot of time with her due to sick in-laws. We've got nearly four years and counting, but we have lost two more precious loved ones to this disease named "cancer." Please keep Doug in your prayers and thoughts as he is battling lung cancer. Be blessed!--Kel

  • luvdrkchocolate
    January 1, 2007

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    This is a great little write. I loved the picture. It was really engaging and a good way to start this. And how great of you to dedicate this to your mother. The poem was good too and I enjoyed reading your words and enjoying the story. And you're right about it being great to sing even if you don't sound so great.


  • JoyfulWriter
    December 31, 2006

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    Beautiful!

    An absolutely beautiful and inspiring piece of poetry....your words and emotions are so powerful and the flow wonderful....great job...smiles, Terry

    • kvwriter silver member
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you1

      Bless you for your comments! Busy taking care of people who aren't feeling too well. Love to you and yours!--Kel

  • Poetic Fanatic
    July 2, 2006
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    Wonderful!

    Kelly!
    Good seeing you back too. This is a sweet piece of work to your mother. It reminds me of Coalminer's Daughter.

    Singing does help satisfy a starving soul. Good show!

    Keep writing and keep fighting for the things you believe in.

    Tommy


  • Angelwatchingme
    July 2, 2006
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    This is so touching. I wish your mom the best. May God bless.

  • msjct06
    July 2, 2006
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    WOW THIS WAS LOVELY...all hopes to your mother..reminds me of my daddy!!

  • PalmettoSky
    July 2, 2006
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    The flow of the write is very impressive and just to the point too. I really appreciate this work. I hope you continue writing because I would love to see what else you have to offer. You paint a rich picture with this pallet of words taking us along enveloping us in the feeling and emotion that pores from each line. very captivating in your choice of words. I liked the overall theme of this poem.
    I thought it had a nice flow and feeling to it. Great message in this poem. Thought provoking, Imaginative, and I loved your creative imagery. Your carefully chosen words painted a picture as I read your poetic work of art. I am glad I read it. thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways.


  • shastadaisey123
    July 2, 2006
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    this is a monumental tribute to a mother and a life well lived...music is indeed, the window to the soul..and obviously she has given you a great legacy..cherish it well


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 2, 2006
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    A SONG CAN MOVE A MOUNTAIN!

    It's a wonderful, beautiful, heartfelt, and soulful poem, indeed! And YES it is true that there is a lot to be learned from a singer and their song! I hope your MOM is doing well and still singing as she loved to do! It is obvious her songs taught you of the wonder, love, and beauty of the world!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Angels And Airwaves
    July 2, 2006
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    omg!! this remindes me of my cousin! i love it so good my cousin sings and writtes music she is so insperational


  • SupaLovePoet
    July 2, 2006
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    This poem was breath taking. The imagery in it was so great. It even had a story to go along with it. This was a very wonderful write. Very awesome.

  • childlike faith
    July 2, 2006
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    What's not to like? It is a beautiful piece of work and how fortunate you are to have such a wonderful Mother. What a wonderful tribute you have given to her in this poem. I hope you will continue to carry on this act of teaching through song. My hope, my prayer is that your Mother will continue to be in remission. She must be a special lady to inspire such beautiful writing, childlike faith


  • Solus
    July 2, 2006
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    Breathtakingly beautiful, moving, gentle. Superbly done and immaculate in every respect. Descriptions, imagery, just the entire poem was so lovingly written, with care and tenderness and a peaceful progression. Filled with wisdom, awesome, awesome poem.


  • Wish I could write
    July 2, 2006
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    Tha was beutiful and touching. I loved it! You are amazing!

  • kvwriter silver member
    March 7, 2006
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    Goodness! You made me cry. Bless your heart! Please do, add your own tones, because this is a poem meant for everyone and the more lyrics we can add, the more powerful the song! Thank you! You made my day!--Kel


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 7, 2006
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    Just loving this poem

    "The future is not always our to see. Yet never fear whats around that nexy bend". This is very true and a heartfelt poem. I just loved this write. I read it more then once. Your words are beautiful and so very touching. " I added my own tones to our rainbow of songs. Singing colors rich in harmony and tone ". Just how beautiful is that. You are really good. This is one poem that I am going to have to applaud. You're so right... it is not the journey that matters....It's the walk. You couldn't said it better. You walk on my friend and May God bless your Mother and may she stay well. I'll keep her in my prayers.


  • Best-to-the-Fall
    March 7, 2006
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    smile

    Your mom should be extremely proud to have a kid like you. This poem is very embracive and full of every ounce of you, i can just tell. Great, great job.

  • PoisonRing
    March 7, 2006
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    I agree with bookaddict, this poem is "very heartfelt and clerverly written"
    Beautiful write.
    Vicky


  • bookaddict -SYV-
    March 7, 2006
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    lovely poem. very heartfelt and cleverly written. my mom used to sing me lullabies and we still sing a lot. i agree, music is amazing and everyone can enjoy it.
    Edited on Mar 07, 4:15 p.m. because ''.


  • black-angelwings-
    March 7, 2006
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    wow, this poem was absolutely amazing, i really thought i was going to cry.. i was so into it, i never wanted it to end.. the flow was amazing. well penned!

  • Cristea
    March 7, 2006
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    very good

    Love is very nice in your poem.
    Deep emotions and very sweet.

  • boilerjim
    March 7, 2006
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    I just returned from aiding my 81 year old mother after another heath scare, it was worth it and each moment i have with her is precious. I appreciated your message and passion. Thanks for the thoughts and words.


  • exoticbeaches
    March 7, 2006
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    So precious and so true. I sing to my girls every day we spend our time together. Sometimes i go a few days and give them a rest from singing, but it never lasts...they come to me and say "mom please sing us that lullaby again". They are 11 and 10 now and i suspect they will be asking me to sing when i am old and gray and they have children of their own. Wonderful poem.


  • Unspeakable Tears
    March 7, 2006
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    WOW!!!

    This is a truly beautiful poem as a dedication to you mom. the only word to describe it would be amazing. i loved everything about it. i liked how you rhymed every other line. you show emotion well. usually i dont like to read extremely long poems but this one kept me on the edge of me seat. you did an exraordinary job on this one. keep up the good work. and i look forward to reading more of your work!

  • kvwriter silver member
    March 7, 2006
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    Bless your heart! It's never easy losing someone, ever. I'm so sorry about your cousin. It's never easy. Hang in there and know you and yours are in my thoughts and prayers!=Kel

  • la petite sirene
    March 7, 2006
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    WOW! This made me cry! It was just beautiful! My mom used to sing to us all the time when we were little, and I too now love to sing myself. This is so wonderful and beautiful and I'm so glad I clicked on this. You really have a talent for poetry; it completely flowed. Good luck to your mother, I hope she gets better. I just lost my little cousin to a tumor... but it must be even worse to have someone that close to you have cancer.

    Always,
    Cristi

  • kvwriter silver member
    March 7, 2006
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    Thank you, Jmiller! She just survived ovarian cancer and I know she will appreciate all you had to say. Thank you! You are one of a kind!--Kel


  • jmiller420
    March 7, 2006
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    Extremely Wonderful

    Not much i can say but wow, really enjoyed this piece and everything about it, style, form, topic, not anything to criticize here lol, and thats rare! My mom never sang to me when i was little, but reading this poem makes me really wish she had Thanks for the chance to experience such a good piece of poetry, for sure cant wait to see some more!

  • kvwriter silver member
    April 15, 2005
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    Right now, my mother is waiting for her test results to see if she is still in remission for Stage-3 Ovarian cancer. She'll know on the 18th. Please, please pray for her. I don't know what we'd do if that cancer has returned. Please pray, and please pray for my mother-in-law battling bone cancer and for my uncle who was just given 6, or less, months to live. My uncle has aggressive metastic melanoma. This is incredibly hard, but just know that I'm doing my best to stay strong through it all. Please pray for them! Thank and God Bless!--Kel

  • kvwriter silver member
    April 15, 2005
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    Hey Rebeka, I hope your son is doing well. I hope my poem inspire. Please let me know how you're doing. Please know that you are love and appreciated!
    Love,
    Kelly


  • rebeka
    July 10, 2004
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    perfect

    i was really touched by this beautiful poem you have written for your mother...my oldest son is a cancer survivor, Hodgkins lymphoma stage 4b...i know what it is to go thru chemo with a loved one...may God give your mother strength and courage, and the will to keep singing! your poem is beautiful, i am sending it to my son, one line made me smile, the threee men in a tub, he used to sing that as loud as he could in the tub at age five...he is 29 now...some of the lines in this brought tears, and some smiles, this is a great poem, i can tell it is full of memories and precious moments...God bless your family, and thank you for sharing a part of your heart and soul here.
    love~rebeka


  • July 10, 2004
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    Love is the universal language & your mother expresses hers with the awesome gift of song!! What a great gift & leagcy to give anyone! Love & Music can lift anyones spirits! I know when I am down & troubled,,music helps me,,& I also recall when I was younger & my mom would sing on trips or around the house! I pray for your mom & family & I pray she keeps singing always & I know even when the day comes,she'll be singing with Angels on high, always being there to watch over you & yours. God loves the sound of music & laughter & love! Take care!!


  • Dutch Doll
    July 10, 2004
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    wow. i'm 'bout speechless. this was sooo great. you are very moving.
    good ole janis... anyway, great write... still speechless

  • heartbrokengrl
    July 10, 2004
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    beautiful

    this was an awesome tribute, for your mom. wonerful words beautifully written. great write, keep it up!
    -maureen

    i liked the picture btw.


  • myrataal silver member
    July 10, 2004
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    Dearest Kelly

    I was so eager to read your poem, that I did not remember the title - I've read this before, but it is still a write of wonderment ... Thank you for leading me here again. I pray that all is fine with you and yours, lovely Lady



    Myra

  • rosebud
    July 10, 2004
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    the last stanza says it all....lovely poem....very well penned...

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