Spiral--
brain has been jostled.
and it's a whole lot colder
at the bottom of -
everything.
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Author notes
hmm, do you want to know who the author is? [jw]
sorry this is sortof random... inspiration... who can control it? <--- even if it is pretty lame.
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A contest entry
- __________x Spiral. by Hell In Harmony.
300 points, ended March 15, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congrats on the silverware. ♥ don't hate me because I'm a greenie.
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"and it's a whole lot colder
at the bottom of -
everything."
Babydoll.
As long as I'm here;;
I'll do whatever it takes to keep you warm.♥
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ohhhh!! that was really sweet for some reason lol, made me smile ♥
<3
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awesome!
love love love this one! absoulutly great -
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thanks muffin!
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It is cold at the bottom, that's for sure. No matter what bottom ... even the bottom of the lake is the coldest. The bottom of sadness is fucking cold too. Damn. I love spirals, gotta admit.
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lol,
you make me smile pearl.
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-not lame-
not lame, these few lines say more than most can write to save their life, great job & luck in the contest
xoxo,
lys
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aww thanks beautiful.
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I love this piece.
Random imspiration, don't you love it? ♥
Because it's amazing.
Like you.
~Princess of Shadows~ -
AH.
Short
simple
amazing
I am so pleased with the entries for this
Really
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and it's a whole lot colder
at the bottom of -
everything.
That ending was flawlessssss
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